Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, May 6, 2020
All about me
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Rosy,
ReplyDeleteNice job on sharing a little bit about you. I like all the fantastic adjectives you have used to describe your appearance. Shiny pale pink lips, is great.
Well done.
thanks *smiling*
ReplyDeleteHi Rosy
ReplyDeleteYou have thought hard about how to describe yourself and there is a lot of detail in your writing. Do you like having tiny hands and feet? I'd like to know some more about the things you like to do or play or eat? Do you have favourite things?
okay thanks for the idea
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