Once there was a big flood and a girl was all alone at home. She was scared but luckily she had a boat for an emergency she got on and she started fishing. After a while she got tired so she had a little nap and then had dinner that was fish obviously! And then she went to bed and after that she did the same routine everyday until one sunny day the flood stopped and she ran home to hug her mum and dad the end.
Tuesday, April 21, 2020
the flood
The flood
Once there was a big flood and a girl was all alone at home. She was scared but luckily she had a boat for an emergency she got on and she started fishing. After a while she got tired so she had a little nap and then had dinner that was fish obviously! And then she went to bed and after that she did the same routine everyday until one sunny day the flood stopped and she ran home to hug her mum and dad the end.
Once there was a big flood and a girl was all alone at home. She was scared but luckily she had a boat for an emergency she got on and she started fishing. After a while she got tired so she had a little nap and then had dinner that was fish obviously! And then she went to bed and after that she did the same routine everyday until one sunny day the flood stopped and she ran home to hug her mum and dad the end.
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Hi Rosy,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story. I enjoyed your bit about the girl eating fish for dinner. She was a very wise girl. I bet her mother and father were very happy to see her. How long do you think she was on the boat for?
about three days maybe
ReplyDeleteHi Rosy
ReplyDeleteWell done on your story writing!
How scary for that little girl to be trapped on a boat for three days.
Do you like fish?
yesssssss
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