Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Saturday, April 18, 2020
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Rosie
ReplyDeleteWhat a creative way to share your reading response, you are very creative.
Great description using your five senses.
Do you think using the five senses helps to bring the story alive?
definetly
DeleteHi Rosy
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mrs Simanu, what a creative and well presented reading response. I like how you have put the senses in bold, making it very clear for the reader.
Miss Gill.
it was my mums idea
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