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Tuesday, April 21, 2020
My story
The main point of the story is that the tui ruins their quiet camping trip because it copied the sound of the mobile phone’s and made the noise all the time. And the reason they went camping was to not hear the phones all the time and enjoy the quiet.
By Rosy Haines.
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Hi Rosy
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like a funny story as the bird could copy noises but at the same time sad because this ruined their trip.
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