Hi my name is Rosy and I am going to tell you about what we are doing for writing. we had to read a book and pick a character from the book I chose this person I said her name was mum because her son calls her mum it doesn't actually say her real name.
what is your favourite book.
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Hi Rosy,
ReplyDeleteI love the way that you hand drew your picture and then took a photo of it.
Maybe next time you could put more on the personslity in sentences.
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-Stella